Feedback on pitch

From the feedback that we were given from the class, the target audience we used for our pitch were around the correct age range (12-25). Also the director that we used was suitable for our genre James Watkins we looked into our director’s success in other films and the budget, he has directed similar films e.g. The Woman In Black so we then came up with a budget we thought would be suitable for our film. In near enough every sheet we had ‘It definitely has potential’.

In the feedback I saw a repeated thing that didn’t work is the name for our film ‘Orphanage’ it has been said to be original. Although we struggled with coming up with a new title. Some people said that they were confused with our storyline, as we didn’t expand on some of the main characters like ‘Mildred’ for example she had a main role in the film, but she didn’t come across as she did in the pitch that we gave.  They said that the actors/actress we chose weren’t recognisable enough although we chose them as we thought they were suitable for our price range. Other than that, I think that our pitch went rather well as we all had a role to play and got a mixture of good and bad feedback.